Thursday, May 29, 2008

Fe#3

GilJae Yeo
EAP2-B WW
Fluency Exercise #3

One of my international friend and his brother has operation about restaurant owners in Carbondale. This restaurant name is Thai taste. Usually I want to go there because I like eating Thai food, because some of Thai food similar in Korea. I have interest make Thai food, also I like to make Korean food. So, I try to make one of Thai food in my home. But, it taste is not good. I think that when they are making food, they should make to American because a lot of American people come this restaurant. It is very difficult because if you make that it would be forget original taste. So, I think it is hard to make international food.

Tuesday, May 27, 2008

Summary Response

GilJae Yeo
EAP2-B WW
Summary Response

Dangers of the Antarctic

In I. Sample`s (May 15, 2008) “Science: Global warming: World`s wildlife and environment already hit by climate change, major study shows: 90% of damage caused by rising temperatures: Conclusions based on reports going back to 1970” he explains that the population of the Antarctic penguin has been decreasing because of climate change and increasing temperatures. The wildlife and environment on every continent have been confused because of global warming. It might be happening because of human activity. Changing the environment causes melting permafrost, retreating glaciers and rising temperatures because of global warming. Also, krill has suffered from a decrease in population because of the increasing temperature of the oceans.

Now, we have many problems because of global warming, because people make serious pollution. I plan to write that freon gas makes a hole in the ozone, factories can eliminate contaminants by water pollution, and the cars can make air pollution.

First, freon gas makes a hole in the ozone. The freon gas comes out while using refrigerator, electronic products, and spray products. It causes an attack on ozone. For example, today many people use these products because freon gas has many benefits; it has small surface tension, it can easily melt oil, and it does not explode, because it is colorless, adovlery, and incombustible. But, freon gas causes destruction of ozone. So, we should use less of these products.

Second, factories can eliminate contaminants by water pollution. These reasons make serious problems, because all the world`s oceans are connected. Pollution does not stay where it begins. For example, some factories making dangerous substances have dumped in oceans such things as factory wastes, chemicals, and oil. So, we should keep the laws and not let them do that because it is illegal and it makes water pollution.

Finally, the cars can make air pollution because today the cars are being driven faster. Also, we are using too much chemicals because we are used to cars. It makes serious air pollution. For example, when we use cars, it causes the air to change faster, because of smog, destruction of ozone, and the making of harmful air pollution. Moreover, the cars emit exhaust gas. So, we should reduce the use of cars, because it might make good environment.

In conclusion, we should protect the environment, because when we do not have to protect the environment, it causes the killing of Antarctic animals. Also, if we are using froen gas, it might make an ozone hole, and factories can eliminate contaminants because of water pollution. Also, when people use cars, it makes serious air pollution. So, we should reduce using freon gas and cars. Also, we should keep watch on water pollution by factories.

Reference

Sample, I. (2008, May 15). Science: Global warming: World`s wildlife and environment already hit by climate change, major study shows: 90% of damage caused by rising temperatures: Conclusions based on reports going back to 1970. The Guardian (London). Retrieved May 27, 2008 from lexis-Nexis.

Fe#2

GilJae Yeo
EAP1-B WW
Fluency exercise #2

I think my hometown bigger than Carbondale because my hometown is capital in city. Carbondale is more silent than my hometown. My hometown lived a lot of people and they are use to cars. It makes more noise. And, my hometown has a lot of restaurants. Moreover, we have a public traffic, and we have a lot of bars. Usually, teenagers are make violence from other people. They usually fight to other person and sometimes they are take money from other person. I think that Carbondale is more safety than my hometown. When I was arrived in Carbondale, I felt more comfortable because people are very kind and they have interest to me. I like Carbondale.

Thursday, May 22, 2008

Practice S/R

GilJae Yeo
EAP1-B WW
Summary response

Antarctica Ice

According to P. Spotts (March 8, 2008) in this article “Antarctic`s Wilkins Ice Shelf Eroding at an Unforeseen Pace” Antarctica`s ice shelf collapse because of global warming. Its corrosion does not directly influence the sea level. However, glaciologists worry about Antarctica`s ice shelves their role as a protective barrier, because if this would be melted, it cannot play an important role in keeping the other glaciers away from flowing into the sea. And, the glaciers have been melting faster. Dr. Scambos says scientists could predict the behavior of other ice shelves as weather changes the ocean`s state.

I agree in this article. People should protect Antarctica; also, we should protect nature. I am going to write about air pollution, water pollution, and environment pollution.

First, many people are able to make air pollution because now we are using fossil fuel. It has caused smoke pollution. For example, when we are used to cars, it makes exhaust gas. This induces air pollution. As another example, if oil factories are operating firing, it causes air pollution, because when we burn fossil fuel, it would make serious problems. So, when we use fossil fuel, we should use it carefully.

Second, many companies make water pollution because they emit a lot of industrial waste in the water. Some companies make effluence quietly and create industrial waste because when they are unlawful, they are able to get away whit this situation. Also, if we have an oil tanker sunk in the sea, it would cause water pollution. So, we should try to keeping water.

Finally, we usually make some serious environment pollution, because we use plastic bag or oil. It will cause environmental destruction. And, if we do not have any other resource, we should try to get new resource. We should make effort to conserve natural resources through recycling because it is a good ways.

In conclusion, we have to protect nature. We need to protect air, water, and environment, because it is a very important resource. Some people do not keep our nature. So, we should try to use reusable resources, and when we are using fossil fuel, we have to be careful.

Reference

Spotts, P. (2008, March 28). Antarctic`s Wilkins Ice Shelf Eroding at an Unforeseen Pace. The Christian Science Monitor. Retrieved May 20, 2008 from http://www.csmonitor.com/2008/0328/p25s10-wogi.html

Wednesday, May 21, 2008

summary

GilJae Yeo
EAP1-B WW
Summary response

Antarctica Ice

According to Spotts P. (March 8, 2008) in this article “ANTARCTICA`S WILKINS ICE SHELF ERODING AT AN UNFORESEEN PACE” he says Antarctica`s ice collapse shelf by global warming. Its corrosion does not directly influence sea level. However, glaciologists worry about Antarctica`s ice shelves role of brakes because if this would be malted, it cannot play an important role in keeping the other glaciers away from flowing to sea. And, the glaciers have been malting speed up. Dr. Scambos says scientists could predict the behavior of other ice shelves as weather and change to ocean state.

Sunday, May 4, 2008

haha

GilJae Yeo
EAP1-A WW
Survey Report
05/05/08

Who is smarter between males or females?

Today many people want to intelligence because they want to good life and make more money. Many people try to get a good knowledge and they want to improve their ability. Some people have a different education when they have gifted ability. The group conducted survey about who is smarter between males or females because we wanted to know people think who is smarter between males or females. We need to know how people thought about intelligence and to know people consciousness for intelligence. There were five members in our group. There were Ghada, SA, GilJae, Hana, and Faisal. We have three hypotheses about who is smarter. First, we think that males are smarter than females about mathematics. Next, we think females say that females are smarter than males, also males says that males are smarter than females. Third, we think that females are smarter than males about speaking fluency.
Our group asked fifty people who are different gender and age in Carbondale to get a different opinion. We are survey at Student Center and Faner hall. In addition, we decided to ask students because we wanted to know how people think about who is smarter between males or females. We prepared a survey that has ten questions. Those questions were almost choice male or female or N.D. questions, so it was easy for respondents to answer the questions.
We have some unexpected results and expected results. We have two expected results. First, males are smarter than females about mathematics. Second, females are smarter than males about dexterity. However, we have four unexpected results. First, the result shows that females said females are smarter but males said no different at speaking. Second, females said females are smarter but males said no different. Third, males said no different and males but females said no different and males at spatial relations. Finally, females said females are smarter and no different but males said no different at reading.
In conclusion, we have unexpected results about smart, speaking, spatial relations, and reading. However, we have expected results about mathematics and dexterity. Usually, males did not talk about intelligence but female considers about the intelligence with their friends when they hang out. The men did not show their emotion but women did show their emotion. So, this survey shows that most females think they are smarter than males but most males think that they are no different.